Revised Pages

Another revision for the feature opener, now to be included within Concrete magazine.


Here are a couple revisions to the jump spread. Differences are minor: colour of the swirls and the first swirl has a "jump quote" running inside on one of the spreads.




A couple variations on the end page. Better?

Covers

Trying out some cover ideas... Any thoughts?

The third feature

The start of my last feature.

New Jump Spreads

A couple of jumps to follow the Lush for Life opener.

End Page

A couple of variations on my end page.

Features: some finished, some not.

"Final" Department Spreads

And here's a new one...


Here are my tweaked department spreads. I feel like their fairly resolved except for perhaps the rubric. I'm ok with it but perhaps is it too reserved? Thoughts?


I'm still not quite sure about this one. I'm trying to create something a bit more grandiose considering the arch, hence bleeding the images to the edge. Do people prefer one of these to the other? Does the layout need to be rethought? Thanks.