Trying to fix a spread

This is a spread I've been working on for a while, trying to get it right. The left and right hand pages open out for the gatefold of the bar behind it (hence the illustration side...) Anyone have a thought? Do the two pages work together?

Ad concept work

So I've been doing a lot of work for each of BBDO's clients recently, taking a provided word and then trying to encapsulate the essence of the brand in a single 22"x28" poster. Some have been great, some have missed the mark but I thought I'd put a couple up for people (or really anyone that's reading this...) to see. This one for GE was declined but I still like it.


And a couple others that they did go for.